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I'm stuck in school,
Sitting at my desk,
Stress & Insanity starts to take over,
So I stare at the floor,
To try to forget,
After a few minutes,
I notice something is wrong,
I look up to see that all is on fire,
Chaos is everywhere,
People running for the exits,
Desks being flipped,
I jump up,
To try to escape,
But I am stopped,
By nails piercing my feet,
They are long and rusty,
I try to pull away,
But the pain is too much,
A rafter falls from the burning ceiling,
I close my eyes and cover my head,
Time passes and I open them again,
The school is gone,
So is everything,
I am now in a forest littered with leaves,
Confused I start to walk,
The pain of nails is still in my feet,
I hear footsteps a distance behind me,
Frightened I run,
The noise is closer now,
I hear a gunshot,
A bullet hits my shoulder,
I fall like a brick,
The pain is intense,
The noise comes closer,
I close my eyes and prepare for the worse,
But the noise fades,
I soon hear waves,
I open my eyes to see that I'm on a pirate ship,
I look over the railing to see where I am,
The cabin doors behind me burst open,
The captain walks out,
Runs up to me,
Sword drawn,
Slices across my chest,
Knocking me overboard,
I fall to the freezing waters,
Feet shoulder and chest all hurting,
I hit with a thud,
I wake up in my bed,
Covered in sweat,
My body still hurts,
I lose the rest of my sanity,
Suddenly I hear a low growl,
To my left is a wolf,
I push myself away from it,
But I'm stuck in a corner,
The wolf gets ready to pounce,
I start to yell but the wolf stops me,
I barely stop it from grabbing my neck,
Good bye left arm I say,
It has a tight grab on my arm,
Tearing away skin and muscle,
Finally it is through,
It tosses my arm to the side,
For it has a better goal,
Teeth sharp,
It bites straight into my neck,
Ripping it to shreds,
I no longer feel pain,
It leaves,
I close my eyes to die,
Once again I open,
I'm lying in a pile of snow,
I no longer have any feeling,
No pain, no coldness
'Am I dead?' I ask,
An angel appears and shakes her head,
'No Din, you are not' she replies,
She is beautiful beyond imagination,
'Then where?'
'You are safe'
Her smile allows my sanity to return,
She holds out her arms,
I slowly move closer to her,
My pain starts to fade,
When I get to her,
Everything is back to normal,
I ask her for her name,
In return I got an answer,
And a love,
'Rachel'
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I'm losing my mind, don't know what to do, so here, an old.....thing.....heh...
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!HamsterRawr Jan 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love this so much :'(
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~thelynxwarrior Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks bro, I feel I'm losing my mind......so I explained what is happening to me.....except the angel isn't showing herself anymore...
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!HamsterRawr Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah.. I don't know your taste in music but you may enjoy listening to the song "long way home" by Jon licht. It got me through something similar.
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~thelynxwarrior Jan 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I'll listen to it later, but please, no sad music, I can barely take what's on my radio now! *sigh*
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!HamsterRawr Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Um more inbetween. More creepy then sad.
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~thelynxwarrior Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
? What station are you listening to?
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!HamsterRawr Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's from a soundtrack actually. Im not a fan of the radio xP
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~thelynxwarrior Jan 28, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
AH! >w< Hahaha, ok, I see
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That's sad... I'm sorry...
I understand what's going on...
Rae's doing things she's not proud of
but hey... there is other fish in the sea, Din.
Believe me. There are other girls out there.
I know she loved you greatly. and you did the same.
She's probably really sorry about it
but... just face it. You too were probably not meant to be...
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~thelynxwarrior Jan 24, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I know.....but I'm losing my mind, I haven't been happy for some time......I laugh...but I'm not happy.....
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